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Colours of pink, green, blue and yellow flash before my eyes as I kick around under the water, watching the fish as they dart around my body, back and forth, around and under. I smile, my hair washing out from my body, streaming in long strands in all direction. It’s soft, so beautiful and silky as it brushes across my arms and shoulders.

I am running out of breath, deciding it is time to go up, and I take one more look at the multitude of life streaming around me before kicking with my feet toward the shining sun above. I break the surface with a gasp for air, water spraying about me as I roll onto my back, floating in the warm light of the day.

I kick out - arms and legs in all directions as I yawn, and strain - my muscles feel good from the stretch and I am limbered up. My stomach gurgles and I am ready to eat. Spinning to my front, I pull myself through the water to the edge of the river, hoisting myself up on the soft grassy side of the bank, climbing easily to my feet.

The sun begins to dry my long, waist-length hair as I wander through the forest looking for my next meal. There is an abundance of fruit in the trees around me and I pick at several different pieces - orange, red, green - all with a different taste and texture as I chew and swallow.

Adam will be looking for me soon, his need for me knows no limits: each and every day he clumsily climbs atop my body, pounding and panting until he reaches his climax, emptying himself inside of me before rolling away. I don’t mind, because this is what God made me for, as surely as He had made this garden for us to enjoy together.

So lost in the bright, cheerful day am I that I fail to see you watching me. In the trees you have been following me for some time now, and finally you’re ready to make your move.

Hello! So, obviously this is a Garden of Eden prompt. That much is clear. I’m not a massive theologist, so don’t fret, but the basic premise I want to play out is this:

I’m Eve (obviously), and I believe I was created to serve Adam, bring him his food, keep him company when he’s lonely (laugh at his stupid jokes) and lay beneath him when he wants to get off. He doesn’t care about my needs, in fact, it’s such a non-issue that I’m not even aware that I have needs. I’ve certainly never had an orgasm or been touched in a way that is pleasurable to me.

That’s where you come in

You’re the snake… ahem. Well, you have a snake, anyway ;) Between those gorgeous thick muscled thighs of yours. You’ve watched us for some time now, and you’re disgusted with how Adam treats me, such a gorgeous creature who obviously doesn’t even understand the pleasures of her own body. And you’re going to remedy that.

What I’m looking for

A story : I would like this to be a bit of a story as well as the sexy times. How are you going to approach me? You’re a stranger in the Garden, and I’ve never seen anyone other than Adam before. You’re human looking by the way, not an actual snake (though maybe you shapeshift… I’ll let you be creative), and compared to Adam, you’re a real man, you understand how to give pleasure - not just receive it. And you want so much to teach me.

A little allure: Seduce me, in other words. Give me something to think about as I catch a glimpse of you around the garden. Maybe you don’t approach me right away. Instead you wait for me to come to you. When we are talking, let’s take a trip through the garden as we explore areas that haven’t been seen before, discover new animals and sights as much as each other.

Awakening my desires: Teach me what it’s like to have someone touch my hand, or my shoulder, run their fingertips through my hair or down my side… show me what it is to be kissed, and then take it just that little bit further. Convince me it’s okay to let go, to give in to the pleasures of the flesh, give me my first orgasm and watch as I grow, amazed at what my body can do. Each time I return to Adam, to lay beneath him, I want to know how that affects you, how you feel when you see I’m changing… with your influence…getting closer and closer to claiming my own sexuality. I want the build up as much as the passion.

Taking the prize : And then, finally, make love to me, under that tree that holds the forbidden fruit, and discover what it’s like to let a man be joined with me, rather than only fucked. And once I know that feeling of your cock inside of me, taking me in a way that isn’t just getting pounded into, but something that is the union of two souls that have grown to love.

Then let’s run away from the Garden, together, and leave Adam to fuck the sheep ;)

Who I’m looking for

Someone not afraid to have a little fun. Punctuation, grammar and spelling are major turn-ons, (don’t freak out, I’m not a grammar Nazi, just do your best). Character control is a big no-no, please don’t do that. You don’t need to write super long replies to impress me, as soon as you can’t go further in the scene without my character’s input, hand it over please. Please progress the story with me, get creative!

You can write in 1st or 3rd person, I'm not worried so feel free to respond either way and I'll switch if need be.

I need someone who can lead, and create a world where I am simply wanting to be with you, to discover who I am, etc. Obviously, that isn’t going to work with someone who wants me to take the lead - Eve has never done that, doesn’t even know what it means - you’re here to seduce her, awaken her sexuality, so … please be able to do that. As soon as I am not feeling it, I will be calling it quits. I’m gonna be picky on this one, and I’m willing to wait for the right partner to play it out with. I’m also looking for this to have a long build-up with lots of little teasing moments, but there will be a while until actual fulfillment the whole way. But if you want to tell me about what it does to you (and what you do to yourself) as you see Eve return to Adam each night… that could be fun too.

I’m fairly vanilla - and I suppose to a degree that’s more what this prompt will be about, but I like to have fun inside of that. Profile here but if you have any questions, please ask.

How to Reply

Write a response to my prompt, jump into the scene, make it your own - give me a good sense of your character as the sneaky snake / Lucifer who knows who he is and what he wants.

Other Stuff

I am never fast in my selection and will wait for the right partner who understands where I want to go with this prompt, so if you're debating sending a reply and worried about how long it's been, don't be, unless I say otherwise my door is always open.

This is a cross post from /r/DirtyStoryWriting