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Hey there DPP, Ernest_Gangbangway here. I've got another share for you guys today.
This story centers around my Jaximus prompt, which you can find in my profile by simplying scouring one of my previously posted prompts. I had the honor of working with /u/Vera on this occassion, perhaps one of the best writers I've worked with so far that inherently knew that sometimes length wasn't the best way to go when writing a response to allow the other writer to intervene more often. She and I spent wrote this piece from May 24, 2015 until July 11, 2015 when our correspondence suddenly ended. I suppose she either tired of the roleplay or wished to move on, but I greatly treasure the time we spent together crafting this world, despite it being unfiinished. It originated as a rougher Master/Slave prompt but over time I figured there was potential to turn it into more of a romantic story given how our characters interacted. Of course, I could've just forced her further and further into the depths of depravity but the former option seemed more enjoyable and fitting.
And without further ado, the piece in question: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1btD-bBeIlK0DV01FwzULLQY-5GFexV1nQphI0Hch0GY/pub
Any criticism is more than welcome to further improve my abilities as a writer. I don't spend much time on DPP anymore, but I hope you like what I still have to offer.
Edit: Black text is written by me, the dark red by her.
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