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Let's start at the end, shall we? Get the awkward part over with and move on to more interesting things.
'Come in -- it's open! Wow -- I wasn't sure you'd come. And to be honest, I wasn't sure I would either.'
She wore satin and lace babydoll that night. Plunging neckline. Open back. Mauve with matching panties...
Whew -- that ensemble on a woman as gorgeous as your ma, how could I say no? Besides, she was very excited and pulled out all the stops: it seemed a dick move to chicken out at the last second.
'It doesn't feel right to wear something I would normally wear and show off for Dylan. So, I went shopping this morning and bought this set, just for you. Do you like it?'
Then there's the room: the honeymoon suite in a luxury adults-only hotel that charged an arm and a leg per night. That night meant a lot for her, alright, and I did not want to disappoint.
Oh, but have I mentioned I was a chattering bundle of nerves? I suppose you need more context. Very well...
You see, your ma and pa have been trying for a baby for so long. It was your da that was the problem -- something about his sperm count, or motility, or some other reason. Of course, your ma never blamed him, but I did. Never said it to his face, of course, nor have I shared it with your ma; but I knew Dylan's lifestyle choices were not healthy.
Anyway, I entered the picture because of your ma. Or, it could have been at the suggestion of your pa; or, they were both in on it from the beginning -- I can't remember how exactly that conversation went. All I remember was feeling both stupefied...and aroused when your ma asked for my help.
Well, I suggested IVF, but she countered that she'd rather have me ejaculating inside of her instead of ejaculating in a test tube.
Her words, not mine, by the way. Later on, she'd amend that and lay it to me straight: she wanted me to fuck a baby in her. And she was keen about doing it as 'natural' and 'convincing' as possible -- whatever those meant. Hence, the lingerie, the romantic set up, and the hotel.
'I know it's such a big ask, but I wouldn't be asking if I knew I couldn't trust you. I want you to fuck your baby in me and make me a mom. Well, if not for me, I want you to do it for Dylan, as his best friend.'
She was nervous, too, if I remember correctly. But she sure got into it more quickly than I did.
'So, what's...the play here? How should we do this? Do we make small talk first? Or, do you want...to make out, get you hard?'
Do you want to hear the rest? Very well...
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Hey there, DPP! I hope that was fun enough and interesting. It's not exactly a wholly original idea/premise, but I thought we could put a spin on it by writing it the way I did above: I'm looking for a literate partner willing to write this out in 1st POV, as if we're recounting the events to someone, a la 'How I Met Your Mother.' The fun in doing it this way is that our characters could tell conflicting or even incompatible version of the events, depending on how they're remembering that night they hooked up. It could be simple things: for instance, the color of the lingerie your character wore in the hotel room -- perhaps she remembers wearing something white instead of mauve.
Also, in the write-up above, my character couldn't remember certain aspects of the events: really, whose idea was it to get me involved in the first place? Perhaps your character could provide some clarity.
And it could be huge story beats, too. For instance, what was the dynamic like between our characters? Perhaps my character's version of the events is that he was some dominant-alpha-adonis in bed...when in actuality, he sucked and couldn't get your character wet or turned on -- fun shit like that.
Anyway, that's the idea. And I wanted it written this way because I'm more of a pantser kind of writer instead of a plotter. If you are too, then drop me a line thru Reddit messages, along with your age and a shortlist of your kinks and limits. Ideally I wanted us to start during the encounter at the hotel, but if you have any other ideas let me know :)
Cheers!
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