I have this story ive been wprking on for a while but havent nailed the good parts or the ending yet, could use some good female input

You come into the living room, after just getting out of the shower. You are loosely wearing the bath robe I got you last Christmas, with a tank top and your favorite Victoria Secret Pink sweatpants, under that is a mystery. “how was the shower my love?” I ask you as you plop down on the couch that we got for a steal. You groan “it was magnificent” you say with a sense of relief, “I needed it after today.” You then turn and put your back against the corner and your feet in my lap, I instinctually know to start massaging your feet for you. “how was your day sweetie? tell me all about it” I say as I lean down to kiss your right knee first then jump to the left. You begin to tell me how the doctor you work with is an idiot and wouldn’t know his left from his right if he didn’t have a stupid tattoo on his right wrist. I listen intently, my hands working magic with your feet. You moan in relief and your toes curl slightly. I chuckle in your pleasure and you ask me “What’s so funny?” I smile and look at you, “I’m glad you like it my queen.” A word I haven’t called you in a while, a word that instantly brings back memories to us in our twenties when were young and sprout. Our eyes lock and I give you a smirk you look down and realize my right hand is on your knee and my left hand is crawling up your robe. You breathe in sharply and bite your lip, I begin to glide my hand up and down the inside of your thigh against your sweatpants. I can feel you getting warmer as I get further up your legs. I shift my weight and turn my hips to you and end up wrapped in your legs me, my hands are down by your hips and I walk them up the couch till they are level with your shoulders. Our foreheads touch and I softly press my nose to yours, our lips almost touch but I don’t allow it. I see you lick your lips and bite your bottom lip as your eyes say what your mind is thinking. I look into your deep eyes, there is a fire in them that hasn’t been there since our anniversary, you see the same fire and passion within my eyes as well finally, I act on it.

Dm me if you have ideas, also I have more .