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Hey! In case you don't know what a visual novel is, it's basically an interactive story with pictures in which your choices matter. And an adult visual novel is, well, a visual novel with naked people!
There are three parts for making a visual novel: writing a script, animating, and putting it all together. I want you to help me write a good, hot script; can be about whatever you want, or we can come up with ideas together.
A few basic prompts:
- MC meets a hot woman in the bar, trying to seduce her. Will they succeed?
- MC meets his college crush studying in the library, wearing a tight dress. What would he do?
- MC tries to seduce a man and make him cheat on his wife
I started writing the second prompt yesterday, here's an excerpt of the general idea I had:
First, let's describe the MC's crush. A young adult in her late 20s, she has light-brown skin with brown eyes, and wears her dark hair braided, pulled to the side. She loves wearing black, tight clothes, revealing her large breasts and fit body, though she acts so innocent all the time it's unclear whether she's even aware of how men around her feel.
As for the MC: well, didn't really bother designing him, since, well, doesn't really matter to me :P He can be whatever you want!
The first scene we see MC walk into a library, he looks around and sees his crush from class reading a book, studying for their finals. The reader decides if he wants to approach her, go read a book and hope she notices him, or go jerk off in the bathroom. If the reader chooses anything other than talking to her, the story is over and they are met with a dark screen.
Should the reader decide to approach her, the next scene is him asking her what's up, and she asks him if he is here to study as well. Again, the reader is met with choices: tell her he is here to study, tell her he already studied, or tell her he's just here to use the bathroom.
If the reader chose the bathroom option, his crush tells him she was just about to leave anyway and she'll see him around. Story over.
If they reader chose one of the other options, they MC ends up studying with their crush. If they went with the "already studied" they gain 1 "affection point" with their crush. Affection points collected throughout the story would dictate how the characters react to the reader's choices.
They study for a while, eventually the crush tells the MC she is burnt out and needs to take her mind off studies. The reader then has to choose between several options, the correct choice leading to the MC going to the swimming pool with her to clear their heads.
After swimming they are starving, so they decide to go to the nearest bar for some drinks and light dinner. They talk about life and generally have a good time. The reader has a choice to try get her tipsy, hoping this will affect the MC's chances.
When they leave the bar, they notice it's gotten really late. The MC offers her to crash at his place, and depending on the reader's previous choices she might agree.
I hope you can get the general idea of where this is going from here, still a lot of dialogue and choices missing, by the end it should feel like a truly immersive experience that puts the reader in the MC's POV. Suggest changes so we can get the best interactive story we can!
Feel free to ask further questions if you are interested/curious!
My limits are: non-con, rape, incest, underage, gore, scat
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