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[Event] Come on in and workshop your prompts! Plus, check out r/dpp_workshop! [Workshop Wednesday] for January 25, 2023
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Hello and welcome to the prompts workshop event! But first, a note about the prompts workshop subreddit!

Having trouble getting responses to your prompt? Looking for constructive feedback? Good news! r/dpp_workshop is an official DPP subreddit for getting community feedback on your prompts. It’s available 7 days a week, every week! Visit /r/DPP_Workshop any time at all for help with your prompts--and to try your hand at offering feedback to others as well!

And today’s event? We’re bringing the workshop “on tour” to the main subreddit! This is another place for our DPP denizens to present their prompts for constructive community feedback!

If you are puzzling over your prompt—if you're not sure if your ideas are being communicated well, are alluring enough, or would appeal to your desired partner—this is the thread for you.

Simply post your prompt in the comments below to have it reviewed by your fellow community members. Be sure to include the title and tag!

While you're here, why not browse the drafts that other people have posted, and see if you have any insight to offer? This is a community effort: anyone may post a prompt, and anyone can offer feedback!

A few ground rules:

  • All top-level comments in this thread should be prompts. Please paste the prompt directly in the thread rather than linking to it. Make sure to include the prompt tag and title.

  • Please do not just post ideas, such as "I have an idea about a story for [KINK ROLES], how do you think I should write it?" We're here to offer feedback on what you've already written, not to write the actual prompt for you!

  • Feel free to ask for any specific areas of feedback you're looking for, such as word choice, clarity, or allure.

  • When offering feedback on a prompt, please be constructive and respectful. If you dislike a prompt or don't know what to say about it, just move on without commenting. Likewise, anyone who posts a prompt here should be respectful about the feedback they receive. You don't have to accept every suggestion offered, but you do have to be open to constructive criticism.

  • This event is for improving your prompts, not for finding partners. If someone posts a prompt here, please don't message them for play.

Keep it respectful, keep it constructive, and have fun!

 
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Hey there, looking to workshop this prompt I just wrote up. I'm up for word choice suggestions, though generally I feel pretty confident in my ability to do so when I devote the time to it. I guess I'm looking for feedback on the general structure of it. Is it too specific? Is it too focused on the other characters and not enough on the hypothetical partner? I like the characters I've come up with for this one though, and I do want them to be front and center for this. So just give me whatever thoughts you have. Oh, maybe suggestions for a better title would be welcome.


F4F - Pet Number Four (RP)

It's not a harem. Well, Emma could certainly see how someone might think of it that way, but that's not how she saw it. She wasn't keeping these women as her slaves, forced to serve her every whim. No, they were more like... pets. Like a cat who had free reign to wander the house and to leave and explore should they choose, but always came back home, to her.

Maybe it's best to start from the beginning. Emma Rois grew up with nothing and no one, bounced around the foster care system. Only once she turned 18 did she learn of her aunt, and for a year she had someone, before her aunt passed away from the illness that had long plagued her. Once again Emma had no one, but now she had something. She had both the large and lavish mansion and the small fortune her aunt left her. With that, Emma was able to get her degree and start a successful tech business, working from her large and empty home. But her life's story is not about professional success, but rather the people in it.

The first was Kira. She was seeking to explore her submission just as Emma was learning about her dominance. They quickly fell in together, and once Kira graduated from college they transitioned to live together with Kira as something of a full-time sub for Emma. But Kira had even grander fantasies, of serving Emma alongside someone else, and she encouraged Emma to bring another girl into the mix. To an outsider looking in it might seem that Emma was the kinkiest one, the one with all of these BDSM designs, but those few that know Emma and her girls will understand that really Kira is the kinkiest woman in their home, and it was her that fully brought out this side of Emma.

Sam was second, and one could hardly recognize her now from what she looked like when first meeting Emma. But this was not Emma's doing, rather she just gave Sam a space to live how she wished. When they first met, Sam was struggling in college under the weight of her family's expectations: to study what they wanted, to look like how they wanted. She was supposed to be mild-mannered and polite and sweet and feminine, but that's not who she really was. Emma offered her a chance to live how she really desired, and she found through watching Emma with Kira that their kind of relationship was something she wanted too, and she was added as the second pet.

Ayva came next. She was not naive to the world of kink, but she first ventured into it as an outsider. She was studying journalism at the college in town, and one of her assignments was to cover a local event. She decided to cover a BDSM brunch, one where no overt kink would be practiced, but rather it was just a way for everyone in the scene to get together. It was there that she met Emma and her two well trained pets. They struck such a striking image, the three of them. They were stunning visually of course, two beautiful women in either arm of a third, but their dynamic just struck a resonant chord inside her. They way all three of them moved with each other, such an unconventional relationship but working together in such harmony. On a whim, Ayva kept in contact with all three, though Emma in particular, and inevitably, she fell into their orbit, becoming the third pet.

Emma was not exactly seeking out new girls to bring into her life. She was happy with one, just as she was happy with three, but then again if the right person appeared, how could she say no? She loved this, being able to take care of these beautiful women, to provide for them a home, to let them with their lives how they desired. And of course, she enjoyed dominating them, training them to be good girls for her and for each other.

Emma was not looking for a fourth pet, until she met you...


Hi there, I'm looking for someone who wants to join an already established kinky dynamic. All of the characters will be their own people, not just props, and I'm hoping you'll want to form connections with all of them, not just Emma. The girls are free to be with each other, though you'll find that each of them crave the dominance Emma can provide for them.

I have a variety of kinks, though I'm probably looking to keep things on the more moderate side, not extreme for this RP. The kinks I think best for this story are: bondage, spanking and light to moderate pain, orgasm control/denial/edging/forced orgasms, casual nudity, oral (especially giving), toys, and light petplay.

Some of my limits and things I'm not a big fan of are: bathroom play, general filth, feet, anal, animals, cheating

For my style, I like to write anywhere from a few sentences to a few paragraphs. I normally write in first person, though for this one maybe I'll need to use third for the multiple characters. Let me know which you prefer.

To contact me, please use messages and not chat if you can. Tell me about who you'll be playing as, and if you have thoughts about how you might meet Emma. Also tell me about your kinks, and any other ideas you have for this.

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