Critique my self-made website... are there critical problems?

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[sonsofthesingularity.com](sonsofthesingularity.com)

I have not started a kickstarter yet and I don't have products on-sale. The purpose of this site at the moment is to show that I have something for customers that want to see a website and for customers that are interested in one project to possibly notice other projects. Otherwise, I want to direct conversations to G because other people in this RPG design space tend to be there.

I'm interested in critiques of the home page and two of the product pages:

http://sonsofthesingularity.com/index.php/rational-magic/

http://sonsofthesingularity.com/index.php/sassoon-files/

Thanks!

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