A few days ago, I started writing something that isn't in the form of an erotic audio script, my usual fare. It built and built and I think it turned into something that both is very like and very unlike everything else here.

I have decided to post it here to begin with:
Read Breaking through.

Unlike a script, it has two characters that are allowed to react and converse - or rather, I am allowed to show you all of it without it becoming a marathon of "what's that, you say?" repetitions. I can allow both of them to reflect on what's happening and their thoughts. As someone constantly feeling like he owes people an explanation, being able to command this freedom has been both refreshing and challenging. I largely don't know what I'm doing, but I have read so many stories over the past few years that I knew both what I wanted to do and what I didn't want to do.

I hope you will enjoy it.

(PS: One of the reasons why I didn't attempt this sooner is that I'm crap with names, and I like the direct, absorbing feeling of not having them in a story like this. That said, them being able to address each other by name added something to this story. I decided that I couldn't release something starring the relatable and dynamic characters "%b" and "%g" (my codenames), so the page actually gives them random names - maybe a cop-out, maybe not what a real writer would do, but at least it let me get past it. If you'd like to change a name, you can click it and enter a new one.)