Hey I wrote this story and wanting to know what people think and help me come up with a title.

I split up into parts so if you want to see more say so in the comments Without further ado part 1

Two guys (about 18 and 19) push their way though an old rusty door whiched squeaked loudly "Are you even sure she alive?" said one of the guys (dale) "I can feel her presents, I don't know why, but I can" the other guy answered (Jhon) as they continued to walk though the building Jhon asked "You know what happened to Circus baby's pizzeria,right?" "Gas leak" answered dale as if he was asking a question. a female voice answered "no, the owners daughter died on opening day traumatised he closed the restaurant immediately" Jhon stood quietly trying to find the source of the voice. "How did she die?"Asked dale " A glitch in my system turned out to be deadly" the voice answerd "Baby, I can see the marks from where you dragged yourself away from the fire, your injured , we want to help" Jhon explained they herd loud scraping and turned behind them to see.........to be continued

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