Hello guys,
So I have been trying to learn tremolo for quite some time now.
Probably a couple of months combined, but with sizeable breaks inbetween.
For some reason I seem to have hit a brick wall in terms of progress. I think it sounds really uneven and I struggle a lot with sloppy sounds like accidentally catching the wrong strings. I don't have a teacher and I would highly appreciate some input on things I could improve on - especially in terms of "evenness" and clarity. I could probably play it a LITTLE bit better than as in this video but it's very much representative of how it would sound like if had to play on the spot.
Thanks a lot! :)

https://reddit.com/link/rwm654/video/ualkg38y7v981/player