Note: Not used to typing as much so it might be hard to read, also I've removed most of the conversations cause idk how exactly to structure them.

You can find the background here

I met her friend and we talked for a while, we figured a physical relationship would be better as we're both not into dating right now. I've gotten more abusive with the beta and degrading. She's loved sucking me off while I talk to her friend and cleaning me after I sleep with her friend. This week we finally told her friend about her wish and she agree to try it once. Those two are very good friends so she wasn't ready to break that but with the beta requesting her a lot she agreed to try it once and this is how it went :

Made the beta strip in front of her friend while calling her a pig and degrading her. The friend (let's all her A) was very surprised to see the dynamic. Once she was naked I told her to "go get me something to drink bitch", "yes sir". She comes back with a glass of water and I slapped her telling her to get one for her friend as well, when she did and A took it told her to kneel on the floor while we talk. We kissed for a while and talked about how much of a slut the beta is. It was time to try out just how much A is into this.

Told the beta to come help A undress and she literally hopped towards her for a sec and then got completely shy. I immediately took the glass and poured water over her head and told her to do it slowly and when she was done I'd let her to smell A's clothes. When she was done she got right to smelling her panties and I held A's head as I showed her friend being a complete bitch while I kept degrading her. She was on board, started getting a little more voacal and enjoying this a little. Then we made her lick A's feet while we made out a little.

Over the week or so the current dynamic of my relationship with the beta is I bully her and abuse her when I feel like it. I go out to luches with her and she pays for the whole thing. It's not really a date, she has to pick me and drop me back and if she takes me to nice places and pays for it I might kiss her. There's a lot of other kinks like I regularly spit in her food, made her come out of the car and kiss my foot etc-

I don't mind updating this but I'd need tips on how to write better, especially the conversations and what I make the beta do.