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So the other day, someone private chatted me just telling me they like my work. (I always appreciate fan response, do not hesitate to talk to me. Please. I'm so lonely.) During our talk, they said they appreciated how warm and fluffy all of my scripts were, even the fetishy ones. They 100% intended it as a compliment...
But I'm the sort of person who interprets any accusation of predictability as an insult.
So I reached deep, deep down into the darkest recesses of my soul I usually don't like to acknowledge, and wrote this.
A girl, recently having lost the object of her affections, heartbroken.
A boy, craven, ugly, filled with the desire to dominate.
A lure, leading her into his domain.
And an attack...
This script is pretty focused on the girl's thoughts and self-image, so I tried something a little different. This link will take you to what I consider the "canonical" version of the script, which features extensive use of an inner monologue. For any performers who like the concept but aren't feeling quite up to editing in echoes or however you would differentiate between spoken and thought lines, here is the version of the script without inner monologue. I think the writing is a bit clunkier, but it contains all the same information and I'm still prepared to stand by its quality.
But good lord is this script depressing. If you're feeling down, it might be safer to look at some nicer scripts. If you actually want to tell a tomboy you love her, see Your Karate Girlfriend.
If you want consensual rough sex with a girl who isn't gender conforming, see You're a Girl!?
Or check out other stuff on my script archive.
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