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Which one is better in terms of placing her actions after speaking.
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“You don’t know when to stop,” Victor said. —-space—- “I don’t really care.” ——————-space——————- Jean rolled her hazel eyes, taking a pack of cigarettes out from her pocket.
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“You don’t know when to stop,” Victor said. —-space—- “I don’t really care.” Jean rolled her hazel eyes, taking a pack of cigarettes out from her pocket.
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