Hey guys so I have to write a 100 word story starting with "curiously" was wondering if i could get any feedback from you guys thank you.

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Curiously, Charles had accepted his doomed fate already, for the past years of his life he had done nothing, not just nothing but acts more atrocious than nothing. As an addict he had hurt and stolen plus a myriad of deeds that filled him with anguish. Now he lay stiff in his flat in which its conditions reflected his existence: abhorrent. Despite his past, he was now content, he believed that god had sent an angel, a chance at redemption. In the form of the writhing mass of tentacles his chest, dragging itself *so close* to his ready wide mouth.