More often than not when I message about an ad online about a place for rent, my message will get left on read but the ad will stay up so obviously it's still available.

Since most ads include stuff like "working individuals only and quiet tenants only etc. I thought I'd have better chances if I maybe included a few things about myself in my intro message, however, everything I type out just sounds kind of dumb.

The best one I've come up with is "Hi! Can we set up a time for me to view the house/suite? I'm looking for a move in date for roughly a month from now (to give my current landlord notice.) It's just my daughter (2) and I. We're very quiet, and I work full time. Thanks, I hope to hear back!"