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a cobbled together short narrative i wrote. its nothing special tbh
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you see an old platform with computer equipment attached to it

you turn on the equipment

the monitor blinks to life

*Scanner Booting...

*Loading Scan program SoulReader.exe_V 1.12.5

*Load Complete...

ERROR:404 Soul_Data Missing; User Info Required

\Please Step onto the platform to input User_Data*

Feeling uneasy you step onto the platform. Machinery starts to hum and whir, flickering lights, and a mess of ones and zeros race down the screen in fast succession. As the machine does it’s work you start to feel a slight tingling sensation work its way through your body. It feels strange, even stings a little all over. Even more so, it feels as if some one is watching you, but not you as in your body, but as if they were looking at your soul. as fast as sensation came, it left with a ding of computer equipment startling you.

*Error: User_Data (Unknown) Corrupted

LV: ??

HP: 9999*

=WARNING!=

User Soul: Fractured

=WARNING!=

Power Level Low. Ebott.OS Shutting Down…

as you stand there, eyes still focused on the now lifeless screen you feel a sharp chill pierce your being. The startling revelation of the machine information fills you with intense and searing grief. As your emotions start to surge from the pit of your stomach you can feel the heat well in your face, and the sting of tears swelling in your eyes. Quickly clutching at your chest, your legs give way bringing you to your knees with gasping sobs. As you sob in the middle of the platform your mind begins to race, quick to over think, and give way to irrational panic as grief and sorrow take hold of you. What does it mean? Am I broken? Can it be fixed? How long has it been like this? When did it happen? How did it happen? As the panic furthers, your sobs become more rapid and labored. Then it happens. You hear a disturbing cackling laugh from behind, and three cold mocking words “You, stupid idiot” then you feel a quick a sharp pain and a warm trickling sensation. Then nothing.

You can’t give up now. Please come back, for me?

“okay” you reply meekly

With your hand raised to an odd glowing yellow light, you find yourself in a weird room. A feeling of intense deja vu washes over you. Looking around wondering what just happened you notice a platform with computer equipment attached to it.

You are filled with Trepidation.

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