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Is there a ‘wrong’ way to write twins
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So I'm writing a story, its not particularly about twins but a few of the characters are sets of twins. Now I don't really know much about twins or how close they are nor am I a twin so I just kind went with my relationship with my siblings (which is more so just indifferent) but one of my beta readers said the characters didn't act much like twins at all. Which at first I didn't worry to much since I doubt it's ever going to actually be like a published thing but now I'm panicked because I hate the idea of writing something incorrectly so did I? I would be willed to give more info about the story if needed. (Sorry if this is a dumb question)

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My relationship with my twin is always saying too much and being funny with each other. We are close and but still have a small dislike to each other loll

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