So I made a previous post here explaining the story I was writing. For those who didn’t see it, to sum it up quickly, it’s about a girl just entering high school dealing with her crush. When she’s possessed and works with a demon from hell, they become a superhero, working to return demons back to hell.

Diving a little deeper into the story, my main villain in this story is one of many mob family bosses who has his own demon. While this freshman girl has a demon who works alongside her, this mob boss’ demon deceives him, making him think he’ll get him what he wants, but when he gets his chance, he’ll turn his back on him for his own goals. To sum it shortly, this evil demon wants to raise literal hell on earth to obtain an artifact and be ruler of both hell and earth.

Our freshman hero is a normal, quirky girl who struggles with having a crush and, after meeting her new demon friend, protecting her city. Soon the people in her city take notice of this masked hero, naming her ‘Nightstrike’ not knowing she’s just a young girl. While her demon friend agrees to help her protect the city, he also has a separate goal, getting revenge on a demon who just so happens to be controlling a mob boss.

As far as their powers go for our main hero and villain, they can have up to 2-3 powers, one that allows them to control a certain element and another, more unique power that differs from most demons. When dealing with our good demon, he has the ability to control fire/smoke based elements, while having the unique ability to be able to create weapons that form out of his hands/gauntlets. Our evil demon has powers that consist of raising or reanimating dead and/or living humans into sort of mindless, loyal demon soldiers, fighting at his command. He also has a unique power that allows him to grow tentacle like limbs that grow out of his body. As far as a power that allows him control a certain element, I’m still deciding on that.

Any suggestions or feedback is much appreciated, as I’m trying to make this story the best that it can be