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An Edit to the song Burn from Hamilton, fitting into our loving father that burned and lost.
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(Dalinar:) I saved every vision you sent me

From the moment I saw them, I knew I will fight

You said I will fight

I thought I will fight

Do you know what Navani said

When we saw your first vision arrives?

She said

"Be careful with Sadeas,

He will do what it takes to survive"

He and his thrill flooded my senses

Their shardblades left me defenseless

We built us battlefields out of cities

We built our last war

I'm re-watching the visions you wrote me

I'm searching and scanning for answers in every line

For some kind of sign, of when she were mine

The world seems to burn

Burn

(Adolin:) You published the visions he sent you

You told the whole world how you brought yourself to kill my mom

In clearing your name, you have ruined our lives

Do you know what Shallan said

When she read what you'd done?

She said

"You have born to an radiant,

He has flown too close to the sun"

You and your words, obsessed with your legacy

Your sentences border on senseless

And you are paranoid in every paragraph

How they perceive you

You, you, you

I'm erasing you now from the narrative [note, not in the song: this is why Dalinar has so little parts in RoW] Let future cosmere fans wonder how Evi reacted when

you broke her heart

You have torn it all apart, and you were watching it

Burn

Watching it burn

(Dalinar, in front of cultivation:) The world has no right to my heart

The war has no place in my life

They don't get to know what I said

I'm burning the memories

Burning the memories that might have redeem me

(To Evi) I forfeit all rights to your heart

I forfeit your place in my mind

I can't hear your name anymore

And no more the memories of when you were mine

Of when you have burned

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