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I would love to have some feedback on these lyrics. I'm imagining a slow country/pop song beat for these.
"After a long day
Coming down to rest
So many struggles gone
And I’ve given my best
Here you come
With a drink and a smile
Sitting down beside me
Just listening a while
Girl, I don’t know how you do it
Day in and out
Wife mother, saint,
You are without a doubt
An answer to prayers
Sent from heaven above
There is no way I could find
A better love
Weekend comes
We still have running around
Kids to sports and dance
But you never mind pounding the ground
Girl, I don’t know how you do it
Day in and out
Wife mother, saint,
You are without a doubt
An answer to prayers
Sent from heaven above
There is no way I could find
A better love
Yes, you get worn down
Yes, you want to cry
But I am there for you
And we always have one more try
Girl, I don’t know how you do it
Day in and out
Wife mother, saint,
You are without a doubt
An answer to prayers"
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