Updated specific locations to be searchable, take a look at Las Vegas as an example.

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I would love to have some feedback on these lyrics. I'm imagining a slow country/pop song beat for these.

"After a long day

Coming down to rest

So many struggles gone

And I’ve given my best

Here you come

With a drink and a smile

Sitting down beside me

Just listening a while

Girl, I don’t know how you do it

Day in and out

Wife mother, saint,

You are without a doubt

An answer to prayers

Sent from heaven above

There is no way I could find

A better love

Weekend comes

We still have running around

Kids to sports and dance

But you never mind pounding the ground

Girl, I don’t know how you do it

Day in and out

Wife mother, saint,

You are without a doubt

An answer to prayers

Sent from heaven above

There is no way I could find

A better love

Yes, you get worn down

Yes, you want to cry

But I am there for you

And we always have one more try

Girl, I don’t know how you do it

Day in and out

Wife mother, saint,

You are without a doubt

An answer to prayers"

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