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Help writing a melody
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I've written a chorus that I really like, but I'm having a hard time putting a melody to it. The lyrics are:
I throw my feathers to the wind
Beyond my bounds, they seem so small
And if the sky shudders still
They’re no longer mine as I watch them fall
Iiiiiiii can handle changes in the weather
If I’iiiiiim unburdened by the weight of feathers
It's about feathers and feeling levity from letting things go, so I'm pretty sure it should be a melody that's light and flowing, but the only melodies that I'm coming up with are darker and heavier (either that or just Set Fire to the Rain by Adele). And advice? Still a very new songwriter here
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