(Edit: Clicking on the link I can see it's been formatted a bit squashed together. When Iook at it on the app it doesn't appear that way, I'm not sure how to fix that, but hopefully it's not to distracting aha)

Hiya. I began writing a script for the pilot to a show I wanted to write, I'd love to one day get it made, even if it was just a YouTube series. This is the first time I've actually properly got into writing a script, I have 6 planned episodes, but obvious I've got to start at the pilot.

Below is the basic premise for the show.

Art Centre

Nichola runs an art class at the local community centre to help people learn about all forms of art from painting to photography, but beneath the surface the center holds even more. Working with a volatile manager, an unlicensed "therepist" and a "wannabe star" cleaner, Nichola works to turn the center into a true safe haven for all who enter.

I'm hoping for A) Feedback on formating, if there's any issues with how the scripts presented B) Feedback on the writing and if it's got its own issues C) Feedback on the actual episode itself (or what's been written of it)

Thank you for reading this far and if you read the script, thank you for that as well!!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vADFawKBu_9Vx4Br2GUbpp9Dhx_u8KhxQbb0DH8dklY/edit?usp=drivesdk