Hi all,

I was lucky to connect with fellow Reddit user u/thebillybison recently and together we have been co-writing a comedy pilot screenplay.

Brief Synopsis :

''After the death of his mother, Graham begins to question everything in his life, particularly his age and lack of accomplishments having reached his mid-thirties. His best friend, Shelly, is there to support him but faces her own battle with ageism when interviewing for a job. ''

Ideally, we are looking for volunteers to give our draft a read-through and let us know your thoughts on the story, characters, comedy and whether you enjoyed it overall. We are open to making changes or to take on constructive criticism to better our work.

You can read the draft here: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1PLCblEhAArJ2YMv_eIuv7WaCSsRFEXwc/view?usp=sharing

Please let us know what you think!