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I haven't written anything for a while so I'm a little rusty.
The idea of the story is a woman, who used to be involved in something bad (as yet undetermined) who managed to get away and start a new life for herself, with one issue - she owes a dept to someone she used to work for and now they want her to repay that dept years later.
This is just a few scenes, 8-9 pages. Please... any feedback on structure, character, dialogue, story etc. all welcomed. If you think it reads badly you can say!
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1N1oksWcPqHxl8h3uoDpmxoM-po_ULKbI/view?usp=sharing
Thanks!!
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