https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B-cFvsVBWGBAdWtwODNxTXRnZjg/view?usp=sharing

Hi guys, would love feedback on this. I want to submit it to the Sun Valley short film script festival next week. This was originally a 13 page script, but I cut it down to 10 to qualify. I didn't cut out any scenes, just eliminated some white space. Hopefully not too much.

I'm planning on making this film as soon as I can raise the funds, so there are a couple camera directions, but I tried to clean it up as much as possible for your reading. I'm wondering if there is enough resolution, or enough of an ending here. I don't want to hit anyone over the head with a big ending, I'm more into subtlety, but I think it is missing something. Maybe more of a resolution on her decision. I'd love to hear your feedback on this!

Logline: A self destructive figure skater struggles with her inner demons while trying to decide if she still wants to skate. (sorry logline is weak).