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Hey everyone, I have two loglines for these shows I'm writing right now and I was wondering if you could critique them.
Post Atom: "In a world of nuclear fallout that has become magical in nature, a cynical bounty hunter joins a robotic detective and his young assistant to save the world using the power of atom."
Fair Travels: "A young loner heads to college and experiences life at its best and at its worst when he befriends some stoners and tries to become one of them."
Note: I would also love if you could critique the show names as well, mostly Fair Travels as I have a feeling it doesn't fit what the show is trying to portray.
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