THE BROOK - Teen Dramedy - First 10 pages of pilot

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Logline: A middle class black teen must adjust to his new white upper class surroundings or become a social outcast.

So this is something I just started working on last week. First 10 pages I've written in awhile. This is loosely based off of my freshman year of high school. I plan on using a lot of voiceovers with my main character to really highlight some internal conflicts. Let me know what you think and thank you for taking the time to give it a read.

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