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Greetings,

Here's a script offer for you talented people. It's about two people, in love and serious about each-other. She's a virgin and she let him know she's ready to change that today. He's very gentle and encouraging, there is a bump along the road but as lovers do they get past it together. <3

// I included a couple of optional sound effects, marked with a ?. Include those if that's fun for you but they're not needed

Mmmmwah! You won't believe this, I got a text at work today that said "I want you to fuck me tonight"! Hmm-haha. Finally, yeah! I was grinning like Cheshire Cat all the way home. People looked at me on the train.

"It's not you, Sir, it's me."

Anyway, look what I brought: Half a grilled chicken pour moi, one salad cup for you and this delicious bottle of wine. Aaaaaand also this slightly less delicious bottle of lube! Haha, you're blushing! Money already well spent. :)

Set the table, I'll just hop in the shower real quick.

...

Oooh, candles! Awesome. [take wine bottle] Allow me to hnnnng pop POP this one. snort That's what they call foreshadowing. [wine being poured?] Speaking of which, about later, seriously, I'm so fucking glad we're doing this. Thrills me to the core. It kinda feels like a first time to me too, you know? First time with a new partner that you're serious about... So, to us, eh? [wine glasses clink?] [take a sip? gargle?]

Mmh! This is good wine! ... Haha, what am I saying? I have no idea. You know, I can taste it's on the sweet side and I can taste it has a note of apple which I like - but does that mean it's GOOD wine? How do you know? ... Yeah, we'll ask Karen. She knows wine.

Geez, I'm rambling here. Getting all antsy, to be honest, what with your glorious cleavage staring at me and the knowledge of what's to come. :3 ... Yesss! I'm all for skipping ahead! ... No, don't worry about the meal. I was hoping you'd want to skip it too. I was trying to make a nice gesture here but I already felt it biting me in the ass when I had to sit still and, you know, NOT fuck you!! ... Alrighty then, fuck the chicken and salad!! [chair being pulled out?] Oh, c'mere you! [kisses] ... I love you too, darling. [kisses] Now clean up and meet me in your bedroom! ... Hm? Nah, big wiff you smell fine. But I'm going to dive into your pussy in a minute, like a pig trying to win its freedom in a french-kissing contest so... [crack up with her] I just want you to feel awesome and clean so that's one thing off your mind. Don't take too long though! I'm starting with or without you!

[take off your belt? Unbotton shirt? Sit on bed? Improv thoughts?]

[she comes in, naked in a pretty bra and pantie combo]

Mmmmh, look at you! When did you get those? ... Well, I love'em. Do me a favor, darling, and stand over there by the window. Mmh yeah, does the warm light feel good? ... You look too fucking awesome bathing in it. ... Pull your bra down! [giggle with her] ... Beautiful. :)

[Carny voice:] Now come on in for the big win! [tap bed?]

[improv cuddling and kissing]

I've said it before, I'll say it again: I love your boobs! Mind if I.. pull hee-hee-heere, yeah, sharp breaths, mmh... [kiss] What if I pinched the veery tip here real.. hard.. oooooh you like that. Good girl. :) Now do it to yourself! No cheating! Really pull, do it again! Mmmh, good. You're making me hard.

Wanna see it? Yeah, take my pants off... Here, let me help [unbotton jeans] Haha, your face when it jumped out! Come up here! [kisses] You're too adorable. :)

Give me your hand. Mmh, let's put it riiiight here. Yes, on my cock. [kiss] Feel how heavy it's gotten. Yeah? That's going in you! ... [kiss] I'd like you to get to know it first. Learn its in and outs before the old... in and out. Haha, yeah, I'm silly, I can't help it. [surprised moan] Yeah, give it a little squeeze. See, you, hnnng, bring it right around. That's why I need you. [moans] ... Of course, you can kiss it! Mmh, that feels-.. OR lick it, that works.. too. Mmmh, yeah, really slobber it up.

[improv gettin blown to your heart's content. Maybe comment on her eyes, maybe guide her gently, with a hand in her hair]

Ohhh boy, Getting wayy too close here, I don't wanna cum just yet! [surprised huge moan] That wasn't a challenge, you! Come here [pull her up] That's another [kiss] pinch on that hard nipple of yo-yohh-yours, yeah, let me hear it!

You know, I may not know much about wine but I know what goes well with wet dick! ... Haha, yeah! Say it again, I love the way you say it! ... [giggle with her] And what did you want me to do with it? ... [giggles] Mh-hm! Lift your hips so I can.. there we go.. we don't need those. Now spread your legs! I wanna see how wet we're talking here.

Spread, not clench! [concerned] Hey... you ok? ... You don't look ok... Just nervous? Aww, that's ok sweetie. You don't have to be. ... I know. Just give it a moment.

Look at you, you're shaking! What is it? ... You don't know, huh? It's ok. You don't have to. [lay down next to her] ... No, don't be sorry, it's ok. ... I know. It's ok. Come to papa. [hold her] Mmh, that's better, isn't it?

Hey!! There's no crying in radio! ... Noo, don't be sorry, I was just kidding around to lighten the mood. You know how I am. Just.. let it happen, it's ok. Anything that happens in this room is ok. Anything.

[gradually get more whisper-y and take your time] Sleep, cuddles, sleepy cuddles, tender [kiss] kisses, not so tender kisses, bites, sweet sweet love making.. wild boorish fuck-fests that would make a Viking blush.. It's just us!

And Karen, maybe! OUCH! Haha, there's a smile! :)

C'mere. [pull her close] We'll just lie here, mushed together. Mmh, yeah, put your leg up over me, you know how much I like that. Don't mind the boner, Ma'am. It's not like one of those cursed swords that need to taste blood before you can put them back in their sheath. [relaxed cuddles and kisses]

Don't take this as me trying to rev things up again but.. may I touch your breasts a little? Yeah? Mmh.. [improv]

Heyyy, is that your little hand on my wiener? You're a fucking trooper, darling. Can I quid-pro-quo you there? I won't look! I promise. ... Thank you. [kiss] [you slip your hand between her legs] Mmh. Just resting my hand on your pussy. ... You're still dripping from earlier.

[she's stroking you. Throw in your gasps and grunts and groans wherever]

Aww, you look embarrassed! Don't be! You can literally feel in your hand that it's nothing but turn on for me! I'm going to press on your swollen mound with my palm now and I want you to just let out whatever sound comes to you-ou-hh, good! Little closer to your clit now, let me hear it!

[improv playing with the outside of her pussy. Maybe tell her about the heat that's coming off her]

I'm going to slip a finger in you now. If you don't want that, just shake your head, no explanation required. Otherwise nod. ... No, it's not going to hurt. I got you. Nothing is going to hurt. I'll be gentle and at the slightest sign of discomfort we'll stop. ... Yes, I'll go slow.

Traveling down your slit.. parting your damp, adorable folds.. aand here we are, at your soapy entrance. Feel good so far? ... Good, now close your eyes. Mmmmmmmmmmh, see, it slips right in! There was no pain in that gasp, was there? No, feels good. Here, I'll fuck you slooowly, mmh, yeah, let it out! ...

... You know [kiss] what I [kiss] really wanna do? I want to give you a kiss between your legs. Do you think you can let me do that? Yes? Such a brave girl. [get up]

You're gorgeous on your back. Your tits all flattened out... Gorgeous. Now,.. let me take your knees and... there we go, yes. Close your eyes! ... Can you feel me looking at you? ... I'm basking in you. Can you trust me that I find everything before me right now absolutely perfect? ... No? That's ok. We'll get there, darling.

Feel this? [blow on her vulva] [giggle] [blow again] Mmh. [small kiss on her mound, short pause, then some more kisses] [big muffled groan as you nuzzle into her]

[I don't have to tell you how to eat her out.. improv, until you're slurpring up her juices and finger banging her with two fingers... until she begs you to fuck her after all]

[muffled] What's that? Put my what in what? ... I didn't quite get that. You may have to shout this a little! ... Oh, THAT we can do! [reposition yourself for the task at hand..]

Alright now, this is it. Guide it in, sweetie. I want you to do this. [moan] Yeah, rub my cock between your wet lips. Mmmh. [moan a big weak-knee moment as you enter her]

See, no pain? Just overwhelming pleasure. Almost like we're made for this! [kisses]

[improv kissing and fucking her, super gently at first, then do what you want]

[encourage her to let out her moans, appreciate how expressive she is]

[grunt and fuck and fuck and grunt during this:]

Tell me you're close! ... I know, I can feel you tensing up. Let it happen, darling, let it happen. Let the pressure build up, you're doing great. Cum for me! Good girls cum loud and proud. Ah fuck, yeah! Oooooohhhh yes! You're gonna make me cum too. Shut your eyes, just let it happ-.... ooh, there you go!!! You're pulsing and-.. Ah fucking fuck, I-... [pull out, cum on her belly]

[collapse on her. Post-orgasm giggles and giddiness ensue.. Tell her how incredible it was and how fucking hot she is when she cums. Kisses]

[improv until you calm down]

No, stay. I want you here a little longer. Nevermind the sweat and the cum and the goo. It's the glue that holds us together. [chuckle] We'll clean up in a moment. Nice, cool shower... But for now, just stay and be mine.

Retrospective:

Someone recorded this but took the chipper energy from the beginning too far and made even the parts where a full stop, change in tone and great sensitivity are required sound like he was a loud car salesman. Obviously, as a writer, you can't be there and act as a director. People have their own interpretations of what you wrote. My hat is off to the prolific writers of GWA who, no doubt, experienced something similar but who take it in stride.