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Creating a story with someone is special. Putting down our own thoughts and bringing the story to life. I’ve been wanting to do either a vampire love story, pregnancy story or princess/night or princess/evil prince/king love story.
This will be story driven and focus on the plot. I am a very detailed person and I at least write novel/ three paragraphs. Please don't send one liners as it won't be interesting to roleplay. I mainly roleplay in third person.
Here is an idea of how I write: (please do not steal!)
"Trevor?" A soft voice called, a women with long dark brown hair and bright blue eyes started down the hallway of the Belmont manor. Her worry eyes travels around until she heard voices. Her eyebrows furrowed in confusion as she stopped at a large door to which she recognized leads to the ball room. She pressed her hands to the double doors and opened them as they lightly creaked in need for a bit of oil.
"Tre-" she began but stopped as her eyes widens in fright at the horrid scene before her.
Her hands flew to her mouth as an unknown man with jet black, a bit pass the shoulders hair, had pierced a cross like weapon, with the longer side inside the chest of her husband. Her voice shook out as a hand immediately flew to her six month pregnant belly of her first child. She took small steps back as Trevor turned his head, looking at his wife with blood spilling from his lips.
"Ru..n.." he surprisingly spoke out as if it was his last words.
Evelyn took no chance as she sprinted down the hall, almost tripping over her dress. Her eyes held panic in them as they darted around for somewhere to hide, spotting the room her and Trevor spend most of their time in: the family room. She looked around, deciding to hide in the closet, behind a bunch of coats. She sat down and pressed her hands against her lips to keep herself quiet. Distant footsteps began to approach until they became louder and louder towards the room she was in. Her eyes stared through the small cracks of the closet door just as she saw a figure step in causing her to move back a bit more. Her body shook in fear as one arm was around her swollen stomach. The figure stopped in front of the door until the doors slowly opened revealing the person but to Evelyn's surprise. It was the butler of the house hold.
A shaky sigh escapes her lips as she stood and embraced him.
"Why are you hiding lady Elise?" He asked in confusion.
Elise still held onto him as she cried out "T..there was a man. He killed Trevor" she hiccup "we have to leave" she pleaded.
But the butler didn't move as he held a firm grip on Evelyn's wrist. This caused her eyebrows to furrowed as she looked at the butler until another set of footsteps appeared at the door.
"You've found her. Good" the voice was husky with an ancient accent.
She looked to see that it was the same man that killed Trevor as she couldn't help but to notice his blood red eyes staring back at her. His red eyes looked at the butler
"Thank you. You may leave" he ordered as the butler did what he was told as if he was being compelled.
Evelyn took small steps back just as the man sped in front of her with inhuman speed. Her breath hitched in her throat as her green eyes stared into his.
"Such beauty" the man spoke, lifting his hand up to her hair, gently stroking it "to bad I have to kill you."
A gasp of fright escapes Evelyn's lips as she couldn't help but to notice how long and sharp his nails were and as he spoke, his teeth weren't normal. His canines were much longer and sharper than any human.
"P..please don't hurt me" she pleaded as a tear slip down her cheek, she held a hand to her stomach.
The man ignored her pleas as he leaned his head down to her neck, taking a satisfying sniff "You smell delightful" he smirked with a chuckle.
But Elise didn't know what was coming until she felt two sharp pinches on her neck as a painful gasp escapes her lips. Her hands immediately shot to the man's coat, gripping it tightly in her hands. She felt her blood being drained more and more and felt herself getting weak. Her grip slowly began to loosen and her eyes were struggling to stay awake. The man drained her of her blood , dropping her on the ground as a smirk appeared on his bloodied lips.
"This power. It's so strong" he whispered feeling so much energy running through his dead veins.
He looked at the limp women one last time before leaving as his blood red eyes glowed in the darkness of the manor as rain poured down outside.
"Now I wait until the next doppelgänger to be reborn."
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This is a start of a story I am writing. I want someone that is detailed and doesn’t write just a few sentences and someone who is serious about roleplaying. What I wrote is an idea of how I write.
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