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As per request, I wrote a short follow up to my first RR erotica! Once again, feedback is appreciated!
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First part can be found here: “Lauren”

Next part is here: “Mine”

“Umbrella”

Aaron and Lauren panted loudly, their breaths echoing throughout her room. The sweat from Lauren’s body dripped onto Aaron, and cooled him slightly. She was laying atop him now, catching her breath from their last ride. He pulled himself out of her, and nuzzled her neck, giving it light kisses and tasting her sweat. He placed a hand on her back, and ran the other through her short hair. Lauren steadied herself with her right arm, and pet Aaron with her other, slowly stroking down his head.

The pair were now a complete and sweaty mess, having made love several times over the last hour. Lauren’s cover sheet was now soaked in their fluids and almost entirely stained with moisture. When Lauren rolled off of Aaron, she let out a small yelp of surprise and lurched upwards. Putting her back on the covers had felt like lying atop a cold and wet sponge.

She kicked her legs off the bed and stood over Aaron. The sweat was drying on her skin, slowly getting sticky.

“Okay.” She began. “Now we should clean up.”

Aaron reached a hand out, and she easily lifted him up. As he climbed off the bed, his legs suddenly felt weak from the last hour of lovemaking, and he tumbled into Lauren. She caught him as his head went into her belly, holding him close but firmly. They giggled as he regained his footing. She released him as he stood properly, raising his head to her chest once more and looking up into her eyes.

“Thanks.” Aaron exhaled. He stood on his toes and pecked Lauren on the lips. “My hero.” Her heart melted. She took his hand and began guiding him to the bathroom.

“My pleasure.” She replied. “Now let’s rinse off.”

...

When the water was finally hot enough, the pair climbed into Lauren’s shower together. They let the water drip and slide down their bodies as she held him close, his back pressed into her belly. They listened to the echo of the falling droplets and each other’s breaths. They felt warm, and safe.

Finally Lauren grabbed a loofah and a bottle of soap, and poured the latter atop the former. She foamed up the loofah, then wrapped her left arm around Aaron’s shoulder. He leaned into her left side as she began running the loofah across his chest and arms.

“I’ve never had someone be so sweet, yet so passionate with me before,” She whispered to him. “Never had such a good boy.” She began cleaning below his belly button. As Lauren reached, her upper body curved over Aaron, and she placed her chin atop his head. She kept the water from hitting him, and it cascaded down her neck and back.

Lauren dropped the loofah onto the floor of the tub. Her hand was now coated in soap and suds. She ran it down past Aaron’s pubic hair, and wrapped her fingers around his shaft. With just a light squeeze, he began to grow hard.

She whispered into his ear, “Here’s one more reward for pleasing me so well.”

Aaron put his hands behind himself and onto Lauren’s thighs as she began lightly pulling at his manhood. She thumbed the head as her hand went up and down his cock, rubbing the soap around it and making it slick. Aaron gripped her thighs a bit tighter.

As he seemed to reach his full length, Lauren began to increase the speed of her strokes. Now her hand ran all the way up and down cock, easily sliding from the base to his head.

Aaron’s breaths grew more rapid as she picked up the pace. He let out a deep moan, his head swimming from the steamy water and pleasure of Lauren’s hand.

When she felt his cock begin to twitch, Lauren went all out. Now her hand was rocketing up and down, getting him closer to blowing his load with every stroke. She used her free hand to guide Aaron’s face up and embraced him in a kiss, interrupting his rapid breaths. Aaron’s fingers dug into her thick, wet thighs, trying to gain purchase as his knees started giving out again.

A knot began to form at the base of his shaft, and was now climbing to his tip. Aaron could no longer keep himself standing, and leaned all his weight into Lauren. She stood firmly, taking it on while still relentlessly stroking back and forth.

Aaron let out a final grunt and a deep, “Oooooohhhhh....” As at last, his seed burst from the tip of his member. His arms shot out from his sides, shoving his hands into the wall and the glass shower door for support.

Lauren smiled softly, pleased with herself and her good boy. She slowed her strokes, before letting go of him and allowing the water to clean them both again. Aaron was grinning, his mind still recovering from the force of his climax.

...

The now clean couple climbed nude into the freshly changed sheets. Once more Lauren turned on her side and allowed Aaron to cuddle into her chest. She curled one arm under his shoulder, and draped another around his belly, holding him tightly. Aaron took the arm on his belly and held it firmly for comfort, like a stuffed bear.

With all they’re libido and lust spent, their touch sparked safety and love, instead of arousal.

“I’ll see you in the morning.” Aaron smiled. He sighed a “Good night.”

Lauren giggled again. “Good night.” She replied, and pecked the top of his head.

They fell asleep to each other’s breathing.

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