Beware My Power: A Green Lantern Story (Action/ Thriller 12 Pages

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A man with the power of a God is threatened when a man from his past comes to inflict his internal pain and suffering on his victims.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1NBVnE13BZr4pMbikiIHGToCztN89Wept/view?usp=drivesdk

This is a fifth draft of a fan-made short film based on DC's Green Lantern. It's inspired from a controversial moment involving Green Lantern, Kyle Rayner with a less-gruesome twist.

Please enjoy and feel free to leave any feedback. Any help you may have regarding Dialog, Action, and Tension building, i would greatly appreciate it.

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