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Like the title says, it's the teaser and first act for a 1 hour spec that I've been working on in my spare time at work. I feel like it's a little long right now, and I'd love any advice on things that are slowing the script down/boring you.
Also, this is the first real script I've tried to write in a long time, so please feel free to call me out if I've made any horrible errors in formatting or committed any egregious script writing taboos.
You can read it here.
As always, thank you for your time and criticism.
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