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Anyone want to look over my one-page RPG about Critical Hits and Critical Fumbles?
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Hello! I've made a silly one-pager to blow off steam or waste time before the rest of the group shows up. Find it here https://drive.google.com/file/d/1nLKYl78YpQtN6ioQeJ-HYUdb9NlvpGjZ/view?usp=sharing or here https://jhgames.itch.io/critical-creatures

Here are my questions:

  1. Does the font and layout work for you, or is it difficult to read? I'm planning on also creating a read-easy print-easy version once my final edits are done.
  2. Notice any typos? I've been staring at it all day but I'm sure I'm missing something.
  3. Have any good CRIT ideas that I can steal?
  4. Would you play this?
  5. Can you still call something a one-page rpg if it's two sided?

Thanks, Reddit!

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