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[QCrit] 63k, paranormal romance, Love&Silver attempt #2
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Good whatever time it is where you are wonderful person at home! I’m back with what I hope is a query in the right direction. This will be just the part I’m explaining the book in, and I’d really like what you think. If there are grammar issues, please notify me as I’m trying to catch them, and tell me what you think besides that. I how you enjoyπŸ‘πŸΏ.

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Diego Ramirez, a man who lost his best life ten years ago; a werewolf mate, and a family that cared for him. Now he is a man looking to reclaim it all. To accomplish this Diego will remedy a scourge of the werewolves that had his own mate, Alpha Liz Vandalia, fearing for his safety, the Virus. It was the reason Liz banished him, as she hurt him under its unhinging influence. Now a biochemist, Diego works to heal this affliction, and for the sake of his mate he will brave any danger the task entails.

Liz Vandalia had always isolated herself. She believed that having any relationship to Alphas, the most dangerous werewolves, was a risk to those she cared for. Diego changed all that, she even connected with her family. When he entered her life she obtained a near perfect peace, but in the madness only the Virus could bring, she hurt him and scared herself. After banishing him, few things brought her broken heart solace, so she devoted herself to being her pack’s leader. When Diego returns with an irrefutable offer, she must put her pack above her fear and risk getting her heart back.

The two will unite to ensure a vaccine is completed. They will face terrorist wolves who believe humanity to be gods, try to keep it together with each other, and hopefully find their way back together. Hopefully.

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Tell me:

Could you understand where this story is going?

Did this interest you?

And was it somewhat stale? Just a hunch it might be, but I am unsure.

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