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Trying my hand at story writing...appreciate positive feedback...THE CONCERT
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Anna was so excited. It was Tuesday and that meant today was the day of the concert she's been looking forward to for a couple of months now. She had actually won her tickets to the show two weeks ago by being the seventh caller and answering three questions correctly about the band. She had been a fan of NOFX for as long as she could remember and knew everything there was to know about every member of the group. She had one more hour until she got off work at the front desk of the only Hilton in Charlotte. She had brought a change of clothes with her along with everything she needed to do her hair and make up. She planned on using the shower in one of the vacant rooms when her shift ended and leaving directly from work to start her 3 Hour drive to the show. Her best friend Ava was going with her since she had won two tickets and would be there by the time she clocked out. The time seemed to crawl by but finally Anna was off and had gone into an empty room right behind the office where she'd taken her shower and dressed in her favorite concert tee and a pair of tight jeans that she thought made her ass look great. She was applying the final touches to her make up when Ava knocked on the door. She let her in and they were both babbling about how excited they were. They both decided that it would be a really good idea for them to pee before they left because Anna wasn't stopping for any reason. They grabbed a couple of drinks from the drink machine and a couple of bags of chips from the vending. They got into Anna's Jeep and two right turns later they were on the highway headed to the concert.

They took turns playing their favorite songs by the band as Anna drove. Once they were a half an hour from the amphitheater Anna opened her big bottle of Gatorade and began to chug it back. She knew she'd be dancing for the next four hours and that meant she'd be sweating so she needed to hydrate. They reached the exit for the venue 30 minutes before the show was supposed to start which meant they'd have plenty of time to park and use the restroom before the headliner took the stage. It was a band that Anna was familiar with but Ava was a huge fan and really wanted to see them. 10 minutes later they were parked and walking up the hill to the seating entrance but neither one of them were prepared for the OUT OF ORDER sign that was posted on the ladies room door closest to where their seats were. Both of them had to go but after talking it over they decided there wasn't enough time to go all the way over to the opposite side to where the other ladies room was and be to their seats in time for the show to start.

They went to their seats with a plan to go to the other bathroom between band sets. They settled in and then the lights overhead went out and a couple of spotlights lit up the stage. The opening band was called Paramore and Anna had heard several of their songs because of Ava. She haven't quite decided yet if she really liked them. Ava let out a slight squeal when they started playing and at first Anna thought it was because of the urgency they were both experiencing to squat over a toilet and release the pressure of their full bladder's but it was more so from the excitement to see her other favorite group play. They sang along and danced a little as the group played but Anna was becoming really desperate to use the ladies room. She looked around more than once to make sure everyone was watching the stage and grabbed herself to apply pressure to her pussy. Ava looked at her once and caught her doing so. She just giggled a little and shrugged her shoulders at her and grabbed her own pussy as she mouthed to her "I have to pee so bad." They were both pretty much dancing in place trying not to piss their pants as the band played their last song.

Finally they both headed over to the other ladies room as quickly as they could. As soon as they were able to see the restroom sign they saw the line to the ladies room stretched all the way around the stadium. They both just looked at each other half with this believe and half knowing neither one was going to make it through the line but they had to at least try. They both joined the growing group of women all desperate to sit on the toilet inside the brick walls of the building in front of them. Several, including Anna and Eva, we're squeezing their crotches trying to hold back the full pressure of their bladders. All of a sudden Ava let out loud wimper and Anna saw a dark spot spread very quickly over Ava's thighs and down past her knees. Before she knew it she had released her hand and was now pissing right through her jeans. At first they were both completely embarrassed but then a woman walked up to them and asked them if they'd like to come back and meet the band. Of course Anna already knew it but she informed them about the lead singer having a pee fetish and that they'd love to have them on stage when they performed their "Gott Pee" song. They both laughed and decided, why not, and followed the woman backstage. Who knew pissing themselves would lead to a dream come true experience of a lifetime?

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