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this morning my eyes were greeted by the sun
the same sun that made you feel warm
on that chilly october evening
the sun that makes you feel safe
by robbing the night of darkness
i saw the same sun that lit the grasses
beneath your feet
the sun that rises each new morning
to remind you that it’s a new day
the sun that shines of bright yellow
what a happy color yellow is
or at least it should be
yet here i am
looking at that same sun
wanting to tear it from the sky
wanting to replace it
wanting to make you feel
even a fraction of what the sun does
i’m envious. resenting.
yet i still like the color yellow
because it makes you feel what i can’t
this is my first ever poem. and criticism would be appreciated :)
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