Who are you, he who inspires me?

You're a jewel of perfect symmetry.

You taught me to love and be free;

You taught me how to be like thee.

But, that changed when I could see

The whole of how you choose to be.

There was a time I could guarantee

Your words would break this reality;

Now I know you by your true actuality,

And so I see through the idiosyncrasy.

You were my captain sailing this sea,

Leading me with simple synchronicity,

And yet it was all just one jamboree;

The strange effects my biochemistry

Made for me while on a bunch of LSD.

Strangeness was present abundantly;

Calling it all madness is no hyperbole.

Often did I feel the dire notion to flee,

But I stayed to be a part of your story;

I guess some people call that loyalty.

You're not perfect, but we can agree

Your life alone was enough to be key

To the lock chaining me to this tree;

Wood known otherwise as insanity.

Critique One 

Critique Two