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"My organs say I'm abusive
Traumatized by their uses
The truth is
I'm just flowing through this world
I haven't felt grounded since I started having problems with my girl
Sorry not sorry
The reaper has caught me
Trying to kill this feeling of being worthless
with impulses
screaming that it's urgent
Legs Shaky, The screams awake me
Sometimes I feel like
God Please Take me
I make plans
But shit just gets flaky
Sunshine, haven't seen it lately
My Med's workin'
Still I've been hurtin'
Death has been flirtin'
Problems stay
Can't replace
Pieces eaten by decay
Sometimes I feel I'm cursed with
A brain that desperately searches
fruitlessly for purpose
Glimpses of how beautiful the earth is
need to record verses
More Important than worship inside of churches
However I
Praise god
The realist niggas done died
Sometimes
Gotta ask why
This genius is still alive
Desperately
Can I make it to 25?
It's a war
But it isn't about victory
It's about grabbing the pen and scribbling our history"
My feedback on other's poetry below. I read quite a bit of posts but I connected with these two the most
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