I haven't tried to write poetry since I was around 13-14. My girlfriend cheated on me last week and I thought about trying to express myself through poems. Please be gentle, it's not great but I don't care. It's mine.

If only you knew,

What I feel; looking at you,

I feel so blue,

So blue.

Maybe there is hope,

For me and you,

Maybe there's hope,

My dreams may come true.

For now we try,

Try to get this right,

To be with you,

Was such a delight.

The pleasure was mine,

Please give me a sign.

Because being with you,

Stops me from being blue.

Edit 1: line breaks not included in original post Edit 2:forgot to clarify edit 1 Edit 3: if it seems like the poem doesn't really know what direction it wants to, like it's muddled and confused - it's a reflection of my own uncertainty

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