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very quick wee one i wrote on the fly today, would love as much feedback as you can give!
seeing you detach
the hefty logs from our bridge,
with that effortless air,
ridding yourself of the fix,
made me struggle to even think
how i’d collapse that connection,
watching you, with ease,
kill the affection.
but as i reached for a log
to bring to my own side,
i saw i had only branches to pick,
so i got to picking and sighed,
sighed as i realised
that everything was not as it seemed,
and that the wringer i went through,
was your usual routine.
thanks in advance!!
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