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Cigarette constellations, ashtray galaxies,
urban tapestries where time unfurls realities,
exhaled from breathless wisps of smoke that flow
from apartments' windows below.
Footsteps reverberate,
in the hollow confines of the street's shadow.
A city's heartbeat, discreet in silence,
murmurs through concrete ventricles.
Press them to your ear,
listen to the thumping,
subtle and near.
Raise your gaze to the city's fingers,
stretching towards a leaden sky.
Read graffiti poetry on walls forty stories high,
in cryptic verses coaxing wandering minds
to imagine their inverses.
Metaphors linger
in the midnight air,
the twilight sonnet where words declare
triumph over city heights,
briefly alight,
as neurons excite before night denies
the cityโs eyes.
In the living, breathing, seeing city, I am found
in alleys where whispers dance,
a tight narrow expanse
beneath a midnight moon's mercurial glow,
where neon dreams ebb and flow.
Picturing pale stars
plucked from cosmic debris,
in this urban tapestry discharging reality.
I feel the rigid earth's resistance,
while measuring our distance
by every degree.
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