Hi, Looking to critique the first 30 seconds or so of a single one of your videos.

I find that most people have already dropped in the first 30 seconds of my own, so for my own video will be looking mostly for feedback of first 30 seconds of my own, hence seems fair to do the same for others :)

I'm totally new here, and although I've read through the faq, I'm not sure exactly what I'm doing, so please let me know if I'm not doing this correctly, or need to change something :)

Edit: ok, so maybe I've misunderstood how this works. My understanding ist hat I post a thrad like this, review two videos, then post my own video to be reviewed. However it works, anyone beyond the fourth poster who thinks I've going to review all these videos, so, sorry to disappoint you, but that's severely optimistic, and not going to happen :) . I will review the first two posters, possibly one or two more, but no others.

Edit2: if anyone who I havent reviewed yet reviews the first 30 seconds of my own video too, then I'll review their video. This applies to the first 4 people who review my video, who I didnt already review. And I also will only count relatively detailed reviews (you can see how detailed my own reviews are). Any reviews like "Yeah, that was good, I liked it. Nice" dont really count :) I'm looking for detailed constructive criticism please :)

Edit 3:

I reiewed the following people's videos. Ideally I hope they will reciprocate by reviewing mine:

1 .https://www.reddit.com/user/Independent_Air8993/

1. https://www.reddit.com/user/ChrisMartinInk/

2. https://www.reddit.com/user/seekthegreatness/

3. https://www.reddit.com/user/Imerged_/

4. https://www.reddit.com/user/Merc_ury_/

5. https://www.reddit.com/user/SequentialGamer/ (who did a fantasticly detailed review of my own video, wooo! :) )

6. https://www.reddit.com/user/Low-Block-6583/

7. https://www.reddit.com/user/ScruffyCityFishing/

8. https://www.reddit.com/user/MiniNinja_2/

9. https://www.reddit.com/user/SnooMuffins1495/

There are at the time of this edit 4 slots for people who write [bold]detailed[/bold] reviews of my own video, who are not in the list above, to whom I will reciprocate by writing a review of the first 30 seconds of their own video:

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Note that going forward, people who have previously written detailed reviews of one or more of my own videos will get priority if/when I create new threads, in the future.

Edit 4: Alright, I will continue working through the list :) By the way, you can see the style of my reviews on other people's posts, so if you are not looking for a detailed as-i-see-it review, please remove your solicitation :D