Odd sub for this but you never know, I've talked to really cool people in these communities. We can read too.

Soooo my wife keeps telling me to write more. She even gave me a prompt and says she likes what I have so far.

I'm trying my best to write in a way that is appealing to women in general and would appreciate friendly... Keyword there 😅 opinions on the bit I have so far. I'm just curious what someone other than my supportive wife thinks, but I also don't want to get ripped apart ya know? Any feedback you'd be willing to give would be cool. I'm a little worried I suck at writing women so thoughts on that would be great. Just remember, is smut, I'm a guy, and this is not my day job 😅😅

Just shoot me a message if you are interested 🤷🏻‍♂️

Thanks🙂