hey all, i've never posted on here before so i can only hope im doing this right.

a while ago I had finished a short story, and a couple months ago i asked my friends/ family members over facebook if theyd like to read it and give me feedback. around 25 people were given a copy of the file (and i told them to tell me what they thought of it afterwards) and the only two people who gave feedback were my parents. obviously, the feedback was useless and biased.

ANYWAYS, so ive come here to see if any of you would be interested in reading and giving me feedback on my short story. to give a summary of sorts: The story follows the second half of the life of a suicidal girl, and her relationship with the many faces that the grim reaper has, as well as the relationship she builds with one specific face. the story heavily revolves around her terrible mental health, so if suicide/depression/etc arent your cup of tea, its all good. its a short story, around 7-ish pages.

if youre interested, comment below. idk if im able to send the pdf file via reddit, but if i cant then ill edit this post to include the story or something else if anyone has a better suggestion.

thank you all ✌

EDIT: added google doc link- https://docs.google.com/document/d/1L5oenNc9aVdsEu7gl0RCTg9JrCddDmrBLjQvBQ5L5o0/edit?usp=drivesdk