I write peotry. Sort of rap infuesed never really shown many people. Would love ur comments. This is just my most recent one I have a problem of not caring about grammar and such when I write. Will delete If not the place to share. "-" indicates new line couldn't figure out how to make it look like a peom

Most days its the same- I got my priorities out of whack- Im lookin to close- While others a lookin to far-

No one is ever busy in life- Fuck them if they say they are- Fuck them because we know they arent- Its all about priorities- Fuck priorities- I'd choose u over anything else - But here it goes in my back that fuckin knife- That fuckin knife, that fuckin knife-

True colours are shown- By simple choices- By simple phrases- Im here and there for everyone- But no ones running around frownin for me- Guess ill just crown myself-

In and out it's all the same- Heightened emotions with lower moments- A larger disconnect- To a connection i can't seem to form- A life in thin grasp - Just wisping away-