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Note: I posted a pure-dialogue version of this story about two and a half months ago, here. I've been going back and editing and revising a lot of what I've posted here, and depending on general opinions, I may repost more revisions as they get past a certain point. I will keep posting new stories to HFY as well, but the rate is going to be slower, since I've decided to avoid what I've been doing, which amounts to posting unedited rough drafts. Instead, I'll work on actually filling them in properly first. This story in particular makes a good example of the difference. Anyway, as I've made sure to note before, comments and criticism are both desired and appreciated.
I walked into the room, avoiding direct eye contact with the alien waiting for me. Its huge eyes just looked like a jet black sclera set in a sack of vaguely damp, wrinkled gray leather. If eyes are a window into the soul, this creepy little guy wouldâve given satan a run for his money. They just put me on edge, somehow. Iâd have to make eye contact anyway, but it would wait.
I strode up to the meeting table, pulled out the chair, and sat down. I shuffled around in my bag for a moment before pulling out a small piece of tech, which I set on the table in front of me.
âBefore we begin, I want to be sure of a few things. This device youâve provided us with, it is 100% effective at understanding and translating languages, correct?â
The alien across from me nodded. Itâs a nice little allowance they made for comfort, learning our body language, but its bulbous head threw the whole gesture off. It made me think of one of those old inflatable toys with a weight on the bottom, that would lean too far to the side before bouncing straight back up. Woobles or something. It didnât really matter.
âNearly. We occasionally find a race with one or two concepts that it has trouble with, but thatâs easily smoothed over.â
I took a deep breath, and waited a moment to compose myself. This whole thing was going to be more trying than not interrupting old man Higgins up the street while he went on about whatever racist sentiment was in his head at the moment.
âOne or twoâŚokay. Thatâs odd.â
The alien blinked. Eyelids came in from not just the top and bottom, but also the sides. Thatâs just plain creepy. Reminded me of one of those really old movies they threw on the media blacklist pretty much as soon as first contact started. Something in black. Whatever it was, I remember seeing it as a kid, and that guy at the beginning had nothing on this alienâs eyes.
âHave you already found something it canât translate?â
I nodded, then pulled out my communicator and scrolled through a few documents. I really needed to clean this thing out. Canât believe I didnât get around to it before coming to such an important meeting. Imagine the debacle that would result if I opened exactly the wrong thing. Never can know what that might be, honestly.
âOf a sort, yes. Mind humoring me for a few minutes?â
The alien steepled its hands together, and leaned forward. Thatâs just plain creepy. I wondered how they learned such context specific body language? Not that it really mattered, I guess. Not my problem.
âCertainly. After all, it can take years to accept a race into the Federation.â
Nodding again, I pulled up a document on my communicator, then leaned back in my chair as I began. This was going to be more interesting than that time your classmate Jimmy found some old matches somewhere and almost burned the school down by mistake.
âExcellent. This shouldnât take much time. I mentioned that we found some issues with your device. Allow me to demonstrate: Espionage.â
The little device on the table beeped, and a red light flashed.
âERROR: NO ANALOGUE FOUNDâ
I sighed. That one had been an accident. We just had the thing sitting in a conference room while we discussed the implications of the visit when it came up. But, when something that simple for us to understand came up, we had to try for more.
âReverse Engineering.â
Again, a beep and a flash of red.
âERROR: NO ANALOGUE FOUNDâ
âSpycraft.â
And again with the beep. This was going to get irritating if I didnât speed things up a bit. Too bad we hadnât managed to find a mute option for that feature.
âERROR: NO ANALOGUE FO-â
âOverwhelming Forceâ
âERROR: NO-â
âScorched Earthâ
âER-â
âKamikazeâ
âE-â
Blitzkrieg, Stealth, Mutually Assured Destruction, Acceptable Losses, Pyrrhic Victory, Guerilla Warfare, Encirclement, Entrenchment, Siege.â
The device gave off a series of distressed beeps, punctuated by rapid blinking of the little red light. I almost felt sorry for it. Almost.
âTOO MANY ERRORS DETECTED. REBOOTING. RUNNING SELF DIAGNOSTIC. NO DISCREPANCIES FOUND,â
I paused, and glanced across the table at the alien before looking back down at the translator. This was going to hit it harder than a washed up holovid actor with no auditions and less money hits rock bottom.
âXenocideâ
The chair across from me clattered to the ground as the alien practically fell out of its seat. I didnât blame the poor thing. Of all the aggressive, militaristic words we tried, that was one of the ones we least expected to translate. I mean, really. Who has a word for the intentional extermination of an entire sapient species when they donât even understand fundamental hostile international mechanics like spying?
âWhy do you have a word forâŚwhat was all that just now?â
I chuckled a bit while motioning for the alien to sit back down. His reaction had been pretty good, perfectly suitable for one of those hammed-up old dramas where the hero realizes theyâve been working with the villain all along.
âWe were confused about that too. So we took a look at the information you sent as part of first contact with us. We noticed something interesting. Every single race in your Federation is carnivorous. Why is that?â
The alien seemed smaller somehow as it settled back into a seat. It looked kind of like a balloon slowly losing air, if that balloon was made of moldering gray leather with eyes that made your spinal column decide it wanted a holiday in Fiji.
âFirst contact has always been made after sapient races make it to multiple worlds. Weâve never found a sapient herbivorous race which failed to destroy themselves in resource wars and aggressive action. Weâve never found herbivores capable of surviving long enough to leave their own world.â
I leaned forward in the chair and smiled while finally making direct eye contact with the alien. I think the poor thing shivered when I did that. Not that I blamed it. Imagine your reaction when you start to put the pieces together and realize that your friendly, upstanding next door neighbor might actually be the worldâs most wanted criminal.
âAnd the races you have found, while commonly using threat displays, do not waste resources on wars they cannot easily win, correct?â
The alien nodded as it slouched a bit in its chair. It looked kind of like it was trying to hide. Who wouldnât want to hide from the monsters in their closet?
âWasted resources means decreased likelihood of survival.â
I shrugged. That was true enough, though rather coldly logical. Dispassionate logic like that has never been our strong suit. Then again, thatâs why I was in this situation in the first place, so it evens out.
âAnd yet herbivores constantly waste resources on aggression, on movement, on having more young than will possibly survive.â
The alien was staring at me. Iâm not sure when the last time it blinked was. I wondered if those eyes needed some kind of lubrication to keep from drying out. Probably, they looked a bit less glossy than they did before.
âAnd they die for it. Thatâs exactly why weâve never encountered spacefaring herbivores. Their inherent aggression is their own demise.â
I held eye contact. I wouldâve almost sworn the alien was a weird statue right now. Donât know who would commission a statue made of old greasy leather, but I was sure someone with too much money and too little sense would give it a shot.
âIndeed. Now, back to the subject at hand. Iâll ask you before we continue: what can you offer humans for joining your Federation?â
The alien sputtered as it started moving again. I think it actually looked offended. Maybe it didnât see where this was going. Not that it really mattered, I guess. I mean, it probably mattered about as much as posting a formal complaint to a new corporate policy, which is to say not at all.
âWeâve already sent the offer. Youâve seen that, Iâm sure.â
I nodded, and began to tap out a staccato rhythm on the table with my fingers. I never could remember where I learned this stupid tune. Iâve known it as long as I can remember, and it just moves into my head on occasion and sticks around like that one couchsurfing friend who doesnât understand the idea of wearing out their welcome.
âAnd Iâm asking, what else do you have to offer?â
The alien just shook its head again, staring at the device. I wondered if it thought we mightâve tampered with it. As if we knew how. That little thing was way beyond our current abilities. We had some scientists pry it open and look inside, just to be sure.
âNothing. Iâm not sure why youâre-â
I raised my hand, cutting him off. Huh. Not sure why that worked. Did they learn that much of our body language? Really creepy, if that was the case. Or, maybe I just had it on edge. I dunno. I guess it didnât matter.
âMay I have permission to connect my datapad with my shipâs computers?â
The alien glanced away from me for a moment. I assumed it was checking in with superiors somehow. Maybe it was psychic, to an extent. Or maybe they just had an implant of some sort. Weâd find out eventually.
âYes, if you like.â
I sighed. I guess that makes things easier for us. I didnât think anyone was going to like what I was about to do. This whole thing felt kind of like one of those holovids of an accident, where you know whatâs coming and donât want to keep going, but for some reason you just canât seem to stop and pull yourself away.
âComputer, show video: Hiroshimaâ
A screen appeared in the air above my datapad. It started playing back an old, grainy video. Shaky, taken by hand in an aircraft in a firefight. Below, you can barely see a city being blotted out by a massive explosion. A cloud of smoke, fire and debris was rapidly climbing into the sky, billowing, growing, blooming into an eerie and easily recognized mushroom cloud.
âThatâsâŚyouâre using weapons of that scale on a population center? How recent was this?â
I shrugged, and closed the video. The screen on my datapad went back to the document I had up earlier. Gotta love how well they managed to predict this whole thing. I made a mental note to recommend a raise for whoever set up that document for me.
âThree centuries ago. Prior to our invention of spaceflight. Part of a much larger conflict. This is a relatively minor example of âoverwhelming forceââ
âERROR: NO A-â
âShut it. Computer, show infosheet: Battle of Stalingrad.â
A series of graphs and diagrams appeared above my datapad. They showed resources, time, maps, battle plans, and death tolls. Images were interspersed throughout, as were annotations on the tactical value of this, the emotional value of that. Prominent among them was a single apartment building, including notes on sniping from the roof and support via tunnels.
âThatâŚwhat purpose would thatâŚwhy w-â
Again, I raised my hand to cut him off, before closing the infosheet. Maybe it was both. Nah, couldnât be. Only way it was both having this guy on edge and our body language is if it somehow had our body language built in. Unsettling thought, but not exactly likely.
âBecause Stalingrad was an advantageous location and the people who died there were considered âAcceptable lossesââ
âERRO-â
âComputer, show gallery: General Shermanâs March to the Sea.â
A multitude of images appeared over the datapad. Rail lines and roads intentionally broken and destroyed. Farms and fields scoured clean and left to fallow. Buildings and towns razed to the ground. A broken people left to mourn and starve.
âSo much wasteâŚthat canât be intentional, can it?â
I glanced at the images, the wanton destruction that campaign caused, and the very orders that caused it. That kind of thing may be considered morally reprehensible now, even a war crime, but it wasnât always. At the time, the strategy was extolled as one of the reasons the war ended the way it did.
âIt was intentional.â
The alien stared at me, its reflective black eyes bigger than Iâd ever seen them before. Creepy as all hell, thatâs for sure. Iâd rather not deal with these kinds of meetings in the future. Maybe after this I could negotiate for some kind of retirement.
âButâŚwhy?â
I tapped my datapad and closed the gallery, then leaned back and tossed my feet on the table. I already knew how this was going to end, so I might as well relax.
âBecause it rendered the enemy unable to use resources Sherman couldnât keep. Computer, assemble and show video grouping: RTS Gamesâ
A large grid of videos came up, showing a huge range of scenes. Largely battle, the settings varied from open space to deep ocean, from early history to the far âfuture.â Even battles across space and time could be seen.
âThe translator canât have gotten that right. Those are military tactical simulations. Higher level than anything Iâve ever seen or heard of.â
I laughed as I closed out all of the videos and turned back to the alien. Creepy and unsettling as it might be, Iâm pretty sure I was terrifying the poor thing. Not that I really felt sorry for it. Not at all.
âNo. They arenât. Those are games. Toys. For. Fun. And theyâre a couple hundred years out of date. From what Iâve seen, nearly every human capable of coherent speech is capable of tactically overwhelming your Federation. And since weâre already here, in space, itâs too late for you to say no. So, Iâll ask again:
What do you have to offer us?â
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