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At the end of your recent vacation, you finally agreed to relent to your partner’s repeated requests to get a little more aggressive in the bedroom, despite your own misgivings.
We finished dinner and went out on to the deck to watch the sunset. Still, you were quiet, withdrawn. We watched the sun dipping down toward the horizon in silence and once the light finally started to fade behind the water, you stood and walked over to my lounge chair. I looked up and saw this… intensity in your eyes, something I’ve never seen before. And just as I was about to ask you what was wrong… you grabbed me by the hair and hauled me up out of the chair. You didn’t say a word, just glared at me for a moment. I thought about screaming, mostly in shock… but then, I realized what was happening… and my breath caught in my throat. You yanked me by the hair through the house. I struggled a little, mostly out of instinct, but in truth, I was already making a mess of my bikini bottoms, just at the thought of what was happening.
-------I've been loving the narrative-style audios for a while and thought I'd explore that a bit more. A while back, I'd written this ridiculously long script about a couple driving home from vacation talking about everything they'd gotten up to on their trip. After trimming it down to make it more manageable, a lot of stuff ended up on the cutting room floor that I was sad to see go. But revisiting that script recently, I realized that some of those sections would make for perfect little stand-alone narrative scripts. So this is one of those. These work perfectly fine as stand-alone stories - no context, no reference to any larger narrative, just short (ha!) little narrative pieces.
Anyway, enjoy: SCRIPT HERE.
As usual, comments, suggestions and creative feedback welcome.
There aren't really any SFX in this one, so my usual offer of editing/SFX help doesn't really apply. But if you would like help editing on this or any other audio, feel free to hit me up via DM. Fair warning, my schedule can be a little wonky, but I'm always willing to help out as time permits.
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