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Thank you so much for the love on part 1! It was amazing reading all your DMs and comments, and I was amazed that you guys actually thought my story was... good? Apparently, my flow makes it feel reminiscent of a good friend telling you a story in a real-life setting. Nice to hear! Your feedback about spacing has also been taken into account.
It is also absolutely insane that it reached the top of the subreddit and got over 400 upvotes (now nearly 500) within only 4 hours. FOUR HOURS! It now has 100k views... you guys are insane, thank you so much.
I will plug myself a little here, I am continuing to write this story and possibly others, and I have added my discord and Twitter on my profile in case you'd like to DM me.
Also, if you haven't read part 1, this won't make too much sense. Please check it out by clicking here.
Anyways, here we go... part 2:
So, where were we?
Ah yes, Tyler had just done the unthinkable. Well, at least what an introverted secretly gay 18-year-old would think unthinkable. Actually, scratch that - this was unthinkable. Who in the world would expect something like this? No, not me, and definitely not you, admit it.
Tyler had just forced his perfect lips onto mine... and, for lack of better words, he was rocking my world. Everything I knew changed in that moment, and absolutely not for the worse. My horny brain was beginning to think some nasty thoughts.. but I couldn't get ahead of myself. Plenty of best friends made out, right? Either way... his tongue began plunging deep into my mouth, exploring each and every one of my teeth, then my tongue, then the roof of my mouth. It was tantalizing.. it felt like he was an explorer, trying to make a map of a new, virgin land, unclaimed by any explorer to come before him.
With every thrust of his tongue, I felt more and more blood rush to my face. The world slowed, and it felt like the only thing to be going on in the entire universe was me and him, furiously making out. I realized that I had sort of been sitting there, so I took the plunge to return the favor. I suddenly pushed myself against him with violent passion, grabbing the back of his neck as if I were a native of the uncharted territory he was exploring, defending my tribe with ferocity. What on earth had gotten into me? I would have never dreamed of being so forward. It was obvious, Tyler had awoken the sleeping dragon within me.
His mouth felt surprisingly warm... I hadn't taken that into account during the many times I had practiced for this moment with my cold, unstimulating hand. His soft gums and smooth insides felt like a waterslide for my tongue... it bounced around, unsure of where to go or what to do. He tasted surprisingly nice, like a fresh piece of mint gum mixed with an intoxicating taste I couldn't put my finger on. Oh, I know. It was him, it tasted like him and him only.
Even though it had been no more than 30 seconds, our newfound infatuation with each other's lips felt like it endured for hours... each millisecond passing by slower than the last. He began to make the most adorable noises, while suddenly shifting his hand from his side to my right cheek.
"Mmph.. hmmm... mmm.." He kept moaning inside of my mouth. Clearly, he was enjoying it. That sent a flooding wave of blood to my now throbbing cock, like a tsunami striking a light house on the shore.
"Fuck... Jack..." He said as he pulled away.
'Oh, shit. Oh no. He's realized what he's done. He's disgusted. We're going to never be friends again. He's going to make fun of me and tell everyone. Oh my god, what if he tells people I forced myself onto him? Shit, my life is over. Fuck fuck fuck.' My mind was racing a thousand miles a minute, intensely worried he was horrified at what just happened.
My fears suddenly melted away when he continued, "I need you... right here, right now. I've been waiting for this for too long, and I'm going to have it no matter what." Tyler's voice had never sounded like this before. He sounded so... dominant. Full of passion. Almost as if he was reverting to his primal instincts, like a wild animal. His words lingered around my ears with a flaming hot sting, igniting a flame within me...
"Tyler, if you don't fuck the shit out of me, I'm going to lose my mind." I stared intently into his deep blue eyes, transmitting a message. You can fuck me, Tyler. I need you to fuck me, Tyler.
Clearly, he got the memo. In one quick motion, quicker than he had kissed me, he picked me up with his bulging biceps and threw me onto the pillows near the top of his bed. He began to crawl on top of me, his chain dangling in my face. Slowly, he motioned for me to lift my arms, and taking the hint, I did exactly as he asked. Fuck, he was so hot like this, a dominant predator hunting me, his prey.
He pulled my shirt off of me, revealing my sweaty body, and began kissing down my body, from my neck to my abs, each kiss leaving a lingering trail of saliva. He reached my underwear, and began pulling them off with his teeth.
"Fuck... I've only seen that in porn... god, your turning me on." I couldn't help but compliment his skills.
He glanced up at me, smirking, "You like that? Just wait for what's next..."
Finally freeing my pants off of my legs, he got access to my now throbbing, hairless hole. He slowly teased my ring with his finger, sending shivers up my entire body. He giggled seeing me writhe in pleasure, clearly pleased with his effect on me.
I closed my eyes to enjoy the moment, and seconds after doing so I felt a warm sensation in my asshole. I opened my eyes to see Tyler eating my ass out. I had never felt anything like it.
"Mmph... ugh... mm..." I could barely get a word out, biting my lip and looking down at him, seeing his bright eyes glare back while thrusting his tongue in deeper.
"Mmmmm... Tyler.. fuck.. I've never... felt that..." I managed to push out.
"I thought you'd like it... clearly he does," He said, pulling away and looking at my now throbbing cock, leaking precum all over my chest.
Embarassed, I apologized "Oh.. mmph.. so.. rry.."
"What's there to be sorry for? You've got such a nice dick... I always knew you were hiding a garden hose in your shorts," He said, grabbing my cock and beginning to play with my leaking tip, using the palm of his hand to slowly spread it around my head, and then down my shaft to lube up my cock.
"MMPPH... FUCKK... AHHH.... oh.... ahhh..." I was breathing heavily now, with new sensations overwhelming me with pleasure.
"You're going wild... guess I'm not the only one who's always wanted this to happen," said Tyler, seductively. He slowly leaned forward, taking the full length of my 7.5" cock in his hand, slowly stroking it with one hand. With the other, he ran his hands up and down my abs, playing with my lightly trimmed brown bush.
'Fuck.. if you keep doing that..." I was getting really close... Taking the hint, he stopped stroking me, instead climbing on top of me and pushing his crotch into my face. He pulled down his underwear, and shoved them into my face, forcing me to inhale his intoxicating odor of sweat and his intensely attractive pheromones. I inhaled as much of it as I could, beginning to lower my guard. I wanted him to know how badly I wanted this.
He threw his underwear to the side, and presented me with the biggest cock I'd ever seen. Up until then, the only dick I'd ever seen in real life was mine, and a few of my hockey teammates. Most of the guys preferred not to fully strip and change in front of the others, instead only leaving their underwear on until they showered.
His beautiful cock must have been 9 inches long, and decently girthy. It had a nice trail of dirty blonde pubes lightly flowing down from his stomach into a thick, hairy bush that managed to pull off a tame, yet wild look at the same time. His tip was uncircumcised, but clearly leaking down his veiny shaft. I couldn't be any more pleased with what I saw.
Thinking quickly, I did what I saw pornstars do all the time, quickly grabbing his low-hanging balls with one hand and massaging them, and slowly descending onto his tip, licking it intently. His precum tasted sweet, like a mixture of sugar and that intoxicating smell of his pheromones. I slopped up every bit, wanting to feel his fluids inside my stomach.
'Here it goes,' I thought, attempting to plunge his cock down my throat. I got farther than I expect to, around 2/3 of the way down, before gagging on his cock. Determined to press on, I held my ground. Remembering what I had read on Reddit, I curled my toes to prevent my gag reflex from making me throw up. It helped slightly, but I think his cock was too big for that to fully stop any reaction.
I began to bob up and down on his cock intently, deeply savoring his taste. With each movement, I took him deeper and deeper into my throat, and before long I managed to fully deepthroat him. Feeling his tip hit the back of my throat was the best thing I had ever felt. I was hooked, and I was going to get more.
"FUCKKKKKKK JACK... where did you.. mmm... learn that..." he screamed out, disregarding my dad's office being just down the hall. Don't worry though, my dad always wore noise-canceling headphones that blasted music while he worked. Thanks, Dad, you're ignorance helped me swallow my best friend. I bet you'd be proud if you knew.
Before I could reply, he quickly thrust down my throat, saying "FUCK JACKY... I'M CUMMING... SHIT... AHH... MMM..."
I felt his cock spasm in my mouth, and he shot a volcano of load after load of his hot semen down my throat. His cum tasted like an indescribable heaven, and I made sure to accept it eagerly. Never had I thought I'd swallow a load... the idea had always grossed me out. With Tyler, it was different.
Wait a second, rewind, pause. I know this is the middle of the story, but did he just call me Jacky? Was he giving me a pet name or just overwhelmed by pleasure? I couldn't bring it up, surely, but I thought maybe something might happen between us romantically. No, it couldn't. I shut the idea down quickly and pushed it deep into the back of my brain, where it couldn't hurt me.
Returning to the moment, I pulled off of his dick and gasped. "Tyler. That was... amazing..." I said, my cock unfortunately still leaking with precum. He collapsed onto my chest, my dick being crushed by his weight.
"Oh my god... it was... but I can tell you're definitely going to need something in return," he said while winking at me and slowly moving down towards my still throbbing cock...
Holy shit. Was this real? Did I just swallow my best friend's humongous load? Is he about to go down on me??
I would soon get the answer to my question...
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Thank you so much for reading Part 2! I hope you enjoyed it as much as part 1. Please leave feedback and suggestions for part 3 in the comments, and make sure to upvote and comment to push this to the top of the subreddit again!!
Also, I'm interested in doing an AI drawing of the two characters to see if you guys can get a better image of what they are like. Would you be interested? Let me know!
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