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First-time collab, first time improving this much. What an absolute laugh this turned out to be.
The many, many bloopers
SFX and editing by u/fischji - Very, very grateful for your work and expertise. THANK YOU so much!
Summary:
The story begins with a dame. As these stories always do. She's in trouble and she needs help. But things aren't always what they seem and private dick Jack Murphy needs to unwind the mystery of why the woman in his office is holding a black rose and whether or not he should risk everything to help her.
Excerpt:
She parted her lips, inviting my kiss. I took the invitation and pressed her hard against the wall. She needed to be kissed and by someone who knew how to do it. When I pulled away, she was breathless.
Before I knew it she was on her knees like a doxy with a sailor on shore leave.
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