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He was there. Not too many people were. Most people skip their five-year high school reunions. They’re too busy with their own lives. Not me, of course. My life was pretty simple. At least until he came along. I couldn’t help thinking back to that time we first met as I saw him in the high school gym, holding a plastic cup of punch.
Over five years ago, he had just moved into the area as a senior. That must have been tough, having to change schools in your last year. Or moving out from the big city to the country. But country living has its benefits. His family had a big stretch of property that went on for acres. It included a good chunk of forest, and even a good-sized stream that ran through it with a waterfall and a pool of water underneath it.
The waterfall and the pool were supposed to be a secret that only I knew about. In all the time I’d been there, no one had discovered it. I guess that’s strange in this day and age, but secret places still exist. Sometimes they’re up in the mountains, or at the bottom of the sea. Or sometimes they’re closer than you think.
He found the waterfall and found me showering naked underneath it.
Another story from me that isn't necessarily what it seems to be at first, and that hopefully works out as both a story and as a twist.
If anyone wants to record this, please feel free to change it however you wish. I could have emphasized the tomboy aspect more, although that could also be removed as well, or anything can be changed. I just liked the visual of this guy walking into the clearing and seeing the tomboy bathing in the waterfall. But as with all of my other scripts, I'm fine with whatever changes someone would want to make.
Please feel free to comment, but please don't tag others in your comments. My desire is of course for someone to record this, but to do so under their own terms.
Thanks for reading :)
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